1. Is it focused?
That is, does it go into detail on a clearly-defined question or topic?
Or does it conduct a general and thus rather superficial discussion? (Example:
An essay that focuses on how Eve's character is revealed in a particular
speech is going to be better-focused than an essay on "Eve's character"
(not to mention one on "Milton's view of women").
2. Is it well-written?
A) Is the essay free of errors in spelling, punctuation, grammar and
usage?
B) Are the paragraphs focused and fully developed? That is, does each
paragraph cover one main idea, and cover it thoroughly?
C) Does the essay's organization make sense either logically or aesthetically?
Is it easy for the reader to follow?
D) Does the argument flow and cohere? That is, do strong transitions
carry the reader from sentence to sentence and from paragraph to paragraph?
3. Is it well-argued?
A) Does the essay have a thesis? Is it clearly stated at some point?
B) Are all factual assertions (about the author, the text, and cultural
contexts) accurate? (Be especially careful to avoid sweeping generalizations,
which are rarely accurate.)
C) Are all quotations accurately transcribed?
D) Does the writer defend his or her conclusions simply by quoting
the text as evidence, or are quotations subjected to analysis that demonstrates
how he or she reached those conclusions?
E) Are all quotations, paraphrases and summaries of others' work fully
and accurately documented?
4. Does it do well one of the jobs literary criticism is designed
to perform?
That is, does it help the reader to understand or better appreciate
the work discussed? Does it uncover a hidden weakness in the work? Does
it reveal or help to explain the work's strengths? Does it provide a fresh
perspective on the author's goals or methods? Does it explore the significance
or meaning of a work for a particular audience? Most importantly
of all, does it discuss the literary work as such, considering how
the writer has handled a particular subject or theme (e.g., an essay
on how the language of Shakespeare's sonnet 87 captures the bitterness
of an abandoned lover) rather than simply discussing the subject or theme
itself (e.g., an essay on the bitterness one feels when one is abandoned
by one's love)? A paper that uses the literary work only as an illustration
to support an argument about the work's subject-matter is not literary
analysis.